Bonus Post! (Active Voice vs. Passive Voice)

I'm sorry I didn't post last week at all. My entire attention and time was devoted to my health.

However, as a thank you gift for being so patient with me, here's a Bonus Post for this week!

I'd like to talk about Passive Voice vs. Active Voice. This is such a subtle topic that it's rarely taught in writing classes and even in college. Yet, it is the unconscious abuse of passive voice that holds many talented writers back from publication.

First, let's describe Passive Voice and Active Voice. Now, these terms have nothing to do with perspective. You could be writing in first person, third, or even second and still be vulnerable.
Passive Voice is when the noun or phrase that should be the object of the sentence, appears as the subject. For example, The map was found by Joseph.
Whereas Active Voice allows the object of the sentence to be just that - the object. Example, Joseph found the map.

Need more?
Passive: Amy was sitting in the corner, next to the washing machine.
Active: Amy sat in the corner, next to the washing machine.
Passive: The sword was wielded by Kash.
Active: Kash wielded the sword.
Passive: Leonard was holding the labels I needed.
Active: Leonard held the labels I needed.

Do you see the difference? Passive Voice does nothing but add extra versions of the verbs "be" or "get". The meaning of the sentence stays exactly the same.

Why, then, are we all so prone to using Passive Voice? Because, we speak most often using Passive Voice. Call it politically correct. Passive Voice softens the statement, whereas Active Voice delivers the message clearly and succinctly. As humans, when we need to communicate a message, we most often do so in Passive Voice to soften the blow of our words on the listener. But the last thing you want to do in writing is soften any blows. What do we want? Tension! When do we want it? Always!

So, even though they never taught it to you in school, do your best to delete as much Passive Voice as possible. Not only will it aid in the tension of your writing, but it will also severely decrease your word count to a passable amount.

Extra Bonus Bonus Post:
Do you understand the difference between Passive Voice and Active Voice, but once you go to your novel, you can't seem to find the Passive Voice you know is there? Here's a way to weed it out. Do a Find or Search for the word "was". Normally, this is the word with the most Passive Voice offenses. (If you're writing in present tense, search for "is".)

It might take you a while before you start noticing all the Passive Voice in your writing because it's so commonly the way we talk. It blends. But once you spot it and really get it, you will never be able to ignore it again. And I promise you, agents and publishers know it.